My old boss told me my emails were 'a wall of words' and I've been writing differently since
He said cut every email to 5 sentences max and put the ask in the first line, which felt rude at first but my reply rate went way up. Now I do it for resumes and cover letters too and got 3 callbacks in a month after nothing for 6 months. Anyone else get a piece of feedback that made you rethink how you write at work?